This chapter is awesome, too! And the most emotional one, yet. I felt a whole range of them: pity for little Lee; gratitude for Sandy's lovely, warm presence; and utter discomfort during the fight for dominance and control between the pilot and copilot. People always tend to become a little bit (or a lot) tribal whenever some sort of emergency or catastrophe occurs and you have shown that so incredibly well here - I am really excited to read the next installment!
Great chapter, emotional, tone-setting. I'm liking the multiple POVs and timeframes and I am really intrigued to find out what happens to the survivors.
This chapter is awesome, too! And the most emotional one, yet. I felt a whole range of them: pity for little Lee; gratitude for Sandy's lovely, warm presence; and utter discomfort during the fight for dominance and control between the pilot and copilot. People always tend to become a little bit (or a lot) tribal whenever some sort of emergency or catastrophe occurs and you have shown that so incredibly well here - I am really excited to read the next installment!
Great chapter, emotional, tone-setting. I'm liking the multiple POVs and timeframes and I am really intrigued to find out what happens to the survivors.
Another great chapter!!!
Thanks!