Hi! I just finished Ch. 2 and continue to be enthralled. I love the cast of characters you've introduced. They each hold promise as the story unfolds. The way you've set up the reader to anticipate possible adaptations to the survivors of the crash was realistically accomplished. I would have defniteily needed a carload of dramamine before getting into that helicopter. (LOL)
OMG something tells me that they're not going to be dead!!
Hi! I just finished Ch. 2 and continue to be enthralled. I love the cast of characters you've introduced. They each hold promise as the story unfolds. The way you've set up the reader to anticipate possible adaptations to the survivors of the crash was realistically accomplished. I would have defniteily needed a carload of dramamine before getting into that helicopter. (LOL)
Thanks Sandy! Can’t wait to see what you think of where things go
Really good setup and character building. This is a cool setting and I can't wait to read the next chapter.