Begin a chilling adventure of a boy’s survival after a plane crash on the ice sheet of Southern Greenland, where man is not the apex predator. "The Thing” meets “Apocalypto.”
Xavier, I just finished the first chapter of THE GLACIER MEN and I loved it. You absolutely made the right move having Lee as your main character in this chapter. It's very easy for a reader to understand, and associate with, the reactions of a youngster (since we've all been there), and Lee is an extremely likable character. I started out reading as a sort of responsibility to another substack member, but I got completely swept away. Thank you so much. I'll be back for more.
This was SO exciting! I really like that little Lee is so young as he is able to see things with a childlike tint that gives the narrative a really lovely register.
I shall definitely be reading on to see what happens in Greenland!
Xavier, I just finished the first chapter of THE GLACIER MEN and I loved it. You absolutely made the right move having Lee as your main character in this chapter. It's very easy for a reader to understand, and associate with, the reactions of a youngster (since we've all been there), and Lee is an extremely likable character. I started out reading as a sort of responsibility to another substack member, but I got completely swept away. Thank you so much. I'll be back for more.
Thanks for the feedback Sandy! Glad to have made the time well spent for you
Oh wow! What a start!
This was SO exciting! I really like that little Lee is so young as he is able to see things with a childlike tint that gives the narrative a really lovely register.
I shall definitely be reading on to see what happens in Greenland!
Excellent start. I look forward to reading the rest (so far) By coincidence my story also begins on a crashing plane. Good job.
Glad you liked it. Things only get wilder as it goes on.
Great opening chapter. Thrilling and tension-building. I'm excited to see where this goes.
Thanks for the feedback, glad you like it! I know you started with #20, so I'm really curious to see how that informs your experience of the story.
Thanks! Glad to write something that made your day better :)