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Oh wow! What a start!

This was SO exciting! I really like that little Lee is so young as he is able to see things with a childlike tint that gives the narrative a really lovely register.

I shall definitely be reading on to see what happens in Greenland!

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Great opening chapter. Thrilling and tension-building. I'm excited to see where this goes.

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Thanks for the feedback, glad you like it! I know you started with #20, so I'm really curious to see how that informs your experience of the story.

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Nice one, I enjoyed reading this :)

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Thanks! Glad to write something that made your day better :)

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