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Jun 17Liked by Xavier Macfarlane

Great chapter. Suspenseful, mysterious a really good setup for the story to come.

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Jun 4Liked by Xavier Macfarlane

Oh wow, this was so exciting and super terrifying! I was quite endeared to the blue creatures, at first. When I saw them untangle Runa and gently lay her down, I thought maybe she really had just been in some sort of accident and they were just trying to help her - misunderstood because of their appearances, but then.... woah!

I really liked Erica - I'm keeping my fingers crossed for her survival!

And I'm wondering if the man is Lee....?

Very compelling!

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Thanks for the feedback! And wow, I never saw that as an interpretation before, but I like it. I guess I already “knew” who the blue creatures were when they get introduced, but you have a real point.

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