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Rob Mortell's avatar

The pacing here is fantastic, exactly what I hoped for as we ramp up to the climax. Good work.

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Sandy Shaller's avatar

Jailbreak was a pretty shattering chapter. I loved it! Muktuk is a horrible character; sadistic, masochistic and vile. His death by fire, as you described it, was hair-raising. Well done. The excitement just builds and builds.

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Xavier Macfarlane's avatar

Thanks Sandy! I always love hearing from you.

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Sandy Shaller's avatar

Thanks; my pleasure...really!

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