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Rob Mortell's avatar

I need a minute to process this. What a finale.

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Sandy Shaller's avatar

Xavier, I continue to love this story, and I can see it as a motion picture. You've tapped into the spirit of writers who often transport the reader off the usual paths of humanity to secret places where forgotten people and civilizations still exist. You also have excellent description throughout the story. One example that grabbed me right at the start of this chapter was, "Geodesic mountain waves rose and fell among dancing oscilloscopes of shimmering color."

The writers I was thinking about earlier were H. Rider Haagard, A. Merrit, and William Hope Hodgson.

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