I foree many sequels and a wider acting stage for your fantastic creations. I love that you left the reader with two scenes of action that are unresolved, but I would suggest that you end with a tag that lets the reader know that there is more to come or even use the final moments with Lee to see us into the sequel.
I foree many sequels and a wider acting stage for your fantastic creations. I love that you left the reader with two scenes of action that are unresolved, but I would suggest that you end with a tag that lets the reader know that there is more to come or even use the final moments with Lee to see us into the sequel.
Thanks Sandy! I’ll see what I can do
Hope I didn't derail your thinking or planning. I'm just excited about the elements of your story.
Looking forward to reading the release version of this!